【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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4 f% N+ B2 x. K; @! u1 M3 V# u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ U! D8 O$ i4 t2 s  JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' _+ J& }/ u7 sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. s. X% {/ H1 e! ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 |: {) u, C& r) _I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  x& ~5 A: m+ U% I+ wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: r' b9 p/ D  @  {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ V7 J. C. V/ k: m; g; dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  k" V% [- r4 v6 i. y! kCan I entrust it to you?
) B1 p; V8 F& D; a9 P% YEntrust my love within your heart
4 x9 W7 Y) u* l1 D4 [* GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% u* \2 o6 Z0 }( V& t; n2 EIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' Q! f; g! N# e6 @/ SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 M8 v5 O2 z: ?Can I entrust it to you?
0 j  O& G: Q5 ]6 I5 m0 ?4 x+ SEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: _# Y8 {) j2 c% S! w/ F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ z& ~$ }% D% f7 t$ P- ~) l9 d5 }( K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 L, ?- O% T( J: N" T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ ?+ S7 t. s' {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 b0 G5 W* S3 W3 d3 t" J- U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  _7 A4 K1 D8 }7 l  r/ r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 T* D% M, r. [5 I; I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- p7 C) Z% u! d* D- ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ z+ O4 y: D8 [! X- R6 K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 v! O: \2 o! _/ X, A) B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 f& U$ K7 u, ]1 h3 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) z- b+ W+ q9 R2 Z! m3 |; s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" f2 x8 I6 c' A1 x8 d% v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) l; Q* I* M$ n6 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 V2 U; J5 \: m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! U+ {% v9 t+ S' x9 ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 N: H0 K9 }8 V2 \  o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' S+ l# i8 }1 X( j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, _$ o; [' e2 [: ]' y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& I+ S5 d$ C' @. t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 z* z1 A* A) W7 F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: A9 A2 @% r# |* }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; H; c3 I5 _1 ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ D* ?0 d0 \6 f8 H3 I2 h; b7 B<P>But I never did </P>
, ?: [, F4 b) P$ }. C<P>但我不会 </P>
9 q. i; g: ]$ m9 Z% i- {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 P1 `# s4 t% O, M: s/ y+ P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 @6 P* t; P0 C+ |- b& ~! M; v7 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 S2 ?5 g! v5 U9 d- A; z: D: R5 V9 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 S% d1 N& \& r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; D2 K/ V3 X' |3 y- }* a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# w2 g; {- K' _) S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 I, ?6 w0 O6 b! u' H6 @; H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 o0 R7 B% @# C! D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 k1 x$ |; I5 e2 G' h2 t! ]% g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ P. C' {5 Q2 y" {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>