【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 Y2 W/ O$ C- R" [) e7 _) PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 q5 {% R+ o) OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 Q" E7 Y% a. d8 qThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 ~, @! p7 `# `9 H, G4 EWith the moon kissing it every night
. h5 Q5 C. Z0 kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& E& T/ V* S/ V; w: Z7 UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" Y" u/ V; f: Y4 C, cEvery other word you utter is love
3 |, X! V+ T1 Y4 [. [6 bI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! ~8 W& a4 n6 l+ wI’m still filled with fear
/ h1 g6 `( ^! {9 q+ ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ v4 R$ S' c7 h. k$ }I regret not dying
3 c1 u" h' P* u/ c& g2 ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: \7 Z9 [& k2 b0 [& IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! e- m! ^% \  \' WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) s( G/ y3 f5 G! G/ e' k# @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# @* ]8 f5 l( m$ K1 [6 _* Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  T0 n( g9 z3 E9 e( y0 y8 ~+ u4 W( k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; \% ~9 y7 o3 W2 l, {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 b- C4 Q, y3 h# c/ q1 t6 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 g$ T" Y8 N7 d1 U) o8 R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* S) y  m. f/ D+ t& @9 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" f2 j+ R& X4 b) H/ {( I  A5 m( x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ _3 `; C1 s% r6 \<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ A, a/ L7 Z* u* F/ v# Z( j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 L' i- i" X, B2 t. w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' \" M# W* O! v# |9 w8 n0 F<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% j+ M" s. R6 C8 x$ r2 E% {; c) p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 p9 M. H% H& U, M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ U1 q# P  N' g, Z5 V6 Q5 J<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' V9 o9 r5 q/ q$ `' v  {' |) y2 X9 `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* N4 ^) _) p1 m; L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# C# Y' m5 v! t( i* S( W  D6 H" X6 W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  C- {% x6 N/ ^" ^" b! r# D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* ^+ y+ s; H1 k: f1 {* b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* [0 z& ]" P4 J* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! h* I$ _2 c: [5 }/ _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 [2 ~, z3 p! i% Z2 w, E<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 K% I3 z0 G$ H- W$ m! d1 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' @5 M2 P- f& m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ S' v. N% u. A1 D1 v0 K7 C; a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 r6 ~2 h/ O: a% q, {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& B  h8 _5 k4 W1 U$ \$ i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 l0 v- S& C" c" H4 q0 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" r- v3 Q" v; y' w. y3 C6 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# r7 ]: I8 @6 ~0 i+ [$ w! M( ^( P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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2 l% |7 R$ _% t% J$ `  q8 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>